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    Please critique my video!

    If you go to the link below, you will see the video of the huge commercial jobs we did in Michigan. I have to have it edited by the guy who did the shoot. Some of his numbers are off, and I will get those changed. But does anyone have any other constructive criticism or comments?

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    http://www.youtube.com/VolkVideoServ...13/cTIrm4-0Luk



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    By the way, lest you think I only do huge commercial jobs, I have also been posting on here about trash-picking. I want customers who see this video to get the scope of what we can do, but I want them to know we can also do small jobs. Not quite sure how to convey this.

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    i liked it. But you voice over guy needs more enthusiasm.

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    Impressive clean out...but can you get some fencing out of a swamp?

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    I like it!

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    very impressive BG.....so glad you are a member of our forum.

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    I really liked the video. I think it did a great job of selling your company's services, Mike.
    "Profit begins when you buy NOT when you sell." {quote passed down to me from a wise man}

    Now go beat the copper out of something, Miked

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dunemaul View Post
    i liked it. But you voice over guy needs more enthusiasm.
    Yeah I was thinking the same thing myself.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kris Kringle View Post
    Great Video Dude one Question why is it not on your Own You Tube Channel?
    I'm not ready to release it to the public yet. I'll do that after final edits. I may do the VoiceOver myself.

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    Wow! You weren't kidding when you said that was a big job. Really good video. The narrator is fine, but you might want to fix the part where he says you "service landlords"
    Don't want anyone getting the wrong idea LOL

    Do you keep that many employees on full time, or did that job require a lot of temporary help?

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    Vid was awesome. If you ever do a tear down like that In denver I know a couple people who can help.

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    I really enjoyed it
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    Great promo! I liked the fact that all your guys had on company shirts, makes you look more professional.

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    Quote Originally Posted by BurlyGuys View Post
    By the way, lest you think I only do huge commercial jobs, I have also been posting on here about trash-picking. I want customers who see this video to get the scope of what we can do, but I want them to know we can also do small jobs. Not quite sure how to convey this.
    I think you conveyed that you can handle whatever comes your way with that video. I think it was a good video and you'll surely get more business from it.... good job!
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    Quote Originally Posted by IronPirate View Post
    Wow! You weren't kidding when you said that was a big job. Really good video. The narrator is fine, but you might want to fix the part where he says you "service landlords"
    Don't want anyone getting the wrong idea LOL

    Do you keep that many employees on full time, or did that job require a lot of temporary help?
    Those guys are my regular junk removal crew. We did use a bunch of temporary help in addition to them. Fortunately this job happened in the winter when not a lot of junk is removed in Michigan, so it kept us afloat at year end.

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    Quote Originally Posted by IdahoScrapper View Post
    Impressive clean out...but can you get some fencing out of a swamp?
    CAN I or WILL I? :-)

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    Quote Originally Posted by IronPirate View Post
    Wow! You weren't kidding when you said that was a big job. Really good video. The narrator is fine, but you might want to fix the part where he says you "service landlords"
    Don't want anyone getting the wrong idea LOL

    Do you keep that many employees on full time, or did that job require a lot of temporary help?
    Regarding the narrator, I like the part where he said we operate both hi-los AND forklifts! (We got BOTH kinds of music, country AND western!) :-)

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    Quote Originally Posted by BurlyGuys View Post
    (We got BOTH kinds of music, country AND western!) :-)
    well done!!

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    I like the part where he said we operate both hi-los AND forklifts! (We got BOTH kinds of music, country AND western!) :-)
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    Quote Originally Posted by Dunemaul View Post
    i liked it. But you voice over guy needs more enthusiasm.
    I actually redid the VoiceOver myself just recently.
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